Ruins of Ner Montu

There stood among the frozen peaks,
The village of Ner Montu
All’s left there is dead and bleak,
The ruins of Ner Montu

The people lived there peacefully,
Hearth and home, Ner Montu
But raids and blood, there would soon be,
The ruins of Ner Montu

A child chosen; Gods had sent,
The hero of Ner Montu
If trained and trusted, he would prevent,
The ruins of Ner Montu

The burning sky, the crimson snow
Last battle of Ner Montu
Bravely fought, ’til last bellow
The ruins of Ner Montu

Over ashes of a family tree,
Cry spirits of Ner Montu
All that’s left for Hero to see,
Are the ruins of Ner Montu

I’m currently writing a story. Right now, I’ve decided to name it “Ruins of Ner Montu”, however the name of the story, as well as everything else about it, may change as I write. I hope to self-publish this at some point, but that’s still a long ways off. Feel free to read through what I’ve got so far, and give me feedback if you have a means of doing so, but again, keep in mind that everything here is still a work-in-progress. Also, please don’t steal my work, or post it elsewhere without my permission. As it stands, there’s not really all that much to steal, but hey, maybe saying that now will save me a headache later.

The chapters are currently in the order that I wrote them in, which is not necessarily chronological in-universe, nor their final story order. For example, I think Chamber will probably end up much further along in the story after Tiberius has been introduced, and The Way Back may not be included at all, or as an introduction to Chardon closer to the end of the story. The main protagonists are supposed to be RJ and Adrastos, so A New Home may work better as a prologue chapter. You get the idea.

Chapter List:
The Way Back
A New Home
The Cold
The Burning Hearth
Blue Eyes
Red Like Embers
Bag of Bones